Monday, September 3, 2012

"Freshman Fangs" Chapter 1 FIRST LOOK

Hello all! Inspiration hit me last night at work, so I started scribbling in my notebook in my down time! I came up with a pretty cool concept, that has probably been done before, but I went with it! I never tried written vampire fiction before, so I will see where it leads! Now, without further ado, I give you the first chapter in the "Freshman Fangs" first book:



C H A P T E R I

                “I triple dog dare you!” Kristy Monroe, my best friend since Pre-Km whispered as we sat in my room, listening to Hot Chelle Ray on blast.
                “If my mom catches me at Deadman’s Path, I’m dead! I would be grounded for a month for sure.”
                Deadman’s Path was a popular hot spot for daring youth. A lot of kids snuck there, against parent’s wishes, to spot the “ghost” that guarded the path.
                “Oh come on, Kay!” Kristy knew I would eventually agree to her dare.
                I rolled my eyes, “Fine. My mom better not find out.”
                “And, you have to do it alone!” She smirked.
                I threw my pillow at her, “You’re insane!”
                “Sneak out the window?”
                I sighed; I knew there was no way of getting out of this dare. Kristy was very persistent when we played truth or dare, and if you picked dare, she wouldn’t let it drop until you agreed. “When mom leaves for bingo.”


                We watched mom get into our blue station wagon, and drive out of sight. She went to bingo every Friday night; I secretly thought she was going to meet up with some mystery man. She hasn’t seen a guy since dad left. I opened my window, and we both slid down the rain gutter. Without making a sound, we darted out of my back yard. My grandmother was babysitting me and my little sister, Tessa. Gram had supersonic hearing.
               
                Deadman’s Path always scared me to death, the way it was abandoned most of the time. Except, when teenagers decided to get their jollies on walking the path by themselves, the ones that clearly had no brain, like me. Kristy and I recognized two girls who were at the base of the path, Alison O’Donnell and Jessica Thomas. They were two of the popular girls in middle school, and that popularity was following them to high school.
                “What are you two nerds doing here?” Alison asked, laughing.
                “Kayla is going to walk the path,” Kristy smiled, putting her arm around my shoulder.
                I rolled my eyes, Jessica and Alison both looked at me. “This nerd is going to walk Deadman’s Path? Alone? You’re bluffing.” Jessica shook her head in disbelief.
                “Fine, don’t believe me.” I walked past them, looking into the black abyss.
                “I dared her,” Kristy mentioned “Kayla isn’t afraid of anything,”
                “No one in their right mind would go in there alone, unless you were some dumb jock,” Alison rolled her eyes.
                “Watch me,” I looked back at them, waved to Kristy, and began to go through the darkened jungle.
                I noticed Alison and Jessica clinging to each other, and Kristy just smiling by herself. She knew that if I made it through Deadman’s Path without being killed, I would be a legend. And since we both didn’t believe in this ghost of the path business, it was most likely I would return a victor.

                It was really cold on the path, which seemed odd because it was the end of summer. But, this path was so cold; it felt like a winter’s Night. I couldn’t see the road in front of me, so I just walked this way and that. Eventually, I had known I had gotten lost. Not being able to see where I am stepping, I was starting to get scared.
                Owls were hooting at me, and spiders were falling on me. Everything was making me jump and twitch. I crouched to the ground, hugging my knees to my chest. I could see my breath, and hearing the slightest sound made me paranoid. I heard a branch snap, which made me stand straight up and look around.
                “Who’s there?” I shouted, hoping to scare off any wild animal that was staring me down for dinner.
                “Hush, hush.” A deep voice came from the blackness.
                “I said who’s there! I know karate!” Luckily, my predator wouldn’t know that I couldn’t even harm a fly.
                “Hush, hush,” The voice said again.
                The voice stepped into view, his whole body was glowing. He looked to be about sixteen, and he had a pasty white complexion and dark brown hair that stood in spikes. His eyes, his gorgeous eyes, were bright baby blue, and I just fell into them as I stared.
                “Who-who’re you?” I stood, mesmerized by his perfection.
                “Deryk,” He walked over to me, placing a delicate hand on my cheek “You?”
                “K-Kayla,” I gulped, “Kayla Van Gayte.”
                “Well, Miss Van Gayte, what brings you to this path?” He smiled, showing pearly white teeth. He was gorgeous.
                “My b-best friend, K-Kristy…she dared me to walk this path alone,” I couldn’t stop staring into his eyes, “Are you the ghost?”
                He looked shocked a bit, and then laughed. He shook his head, “Anything but, Miss Van Gayte.”
                He was so proper, and he dressed as though he was from the 1600’s. I wondered why he was wondering this path alone, “Why are you walking this path alone? I never seen you around before, are you new?”
                Deryk shook his head, “Nah, my family lives in the center of this path. I’m home schooled.”
                “Wow, I never knew people actually were home schooled,” I laughed. His eyes seemed to just glow now, like the rest of his body.
                “Stare…into my eyes…” He whispered.
                I complied, I couldn’t complain, they were gorgeous.  “Okay…”
                “You are a very pretty girl, Kayla,” His smiles made me melt.
                I think I blushed, “I’m nothing special,”
                “This is going to make it less painful, just stare into my eyes…please…”
                “Make what less painful?” Panic hit me. This was it. He was going to kill me.
                “Close your eyes,” He whispered into my ear.
                I nodded and let my eyes fall shut. That was all I remembered.